Post #6

The final draft that we handed in, I feel like including my writing process is so hard. I had trouble of making the essay formal or personal.  I've learner over the years that I had to make my essays formal, I did interperate a paragraph where I included my writing process and I made it personal because i couldn't find any other way to include it without being personal. My essay was repeatative I would say because it was so hard for me to actually include my writing process and answer the paper topic.  I feel like i need an assistance to revise my essay and I will. I am sad that there aren't any more readings even if I didn't like majority of the time. They were fun to talk about in the class discussions, I guess we could still talk about our concerns for the final. 

Post # 5

For the past month of November, we didn't do much class work. We've been working on the final. I found the last in-class essay was a bit hard, the quesion of "What makes writing good?" is so general. I'm pretty sure i did bad on it because to me the question was so general. I picked one topic but i couldn't use just one example to back up my main idea. But i do feel like these topics make it easier for me to write my final essay, and I gotton better at the comparing and contrasing, and also using one example to back up my ideas.